tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2650714799842481877.post6173023709707234708..comments2024-01-18T17:44:23.583-05:00Comments on Kaitlin Bartlett: WIP excerpt!Kaitlin Bartletthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12396607556882297132noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2650714799842481877.post-43980194092623120492013-06-22T12:14:18.253-04:002013-06-22T12:14:18.253-04:00Oh, I really like this! It pulls me right into the...Oh, I really like this! It pulls me right into their world and gives me a bit of their past. I really like your writing style too (well, what I get from this). Thanks for sharing :)Rebecca Barrowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04007014501516438149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2650714799842481877.post-42067777336661225872013-06-18T16:37:30.587-04:002013-06-18T16:37:30.587-04:00I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) Thankfully, this W...I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) Thankfully, this WIP is going really well so far, better than many of my past novel attempts. <br /><br />Thanks for reading!Kaitlin Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12396607556882297132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2650714799842481877.post-31011589444655485562013-06-18T16:22:37.403-04:002013-06-18T16:22:37.403-04:00This is great! I went to an airshow last summer, a...This is great! I went to an airshow last summer, and I like the way you describe it here. You also give readers insight into your mc right off the bat. Thanks for sharing this excerpt, and I hope the rest of the writing is going just as well!Erin L. Funkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00068394727011130144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2650714799842481877.post-78192217269814698892013-06-18T11:30:53.916-04:002013-06-18T11:30:53.916-04:00I was addicted to 7th Heaven in high school! Since...I was addicted to 7th Heaven in high school! Since the book starts in the summer of 2000, I had to Google what season of the show it was (season 5 was about to start). Which fits, now that I think about it, because season 4/5 is when Mary is in her rebellious stage, and I see Caroline in a sort of Mary-esque role. <br /><br />So glad you're interested in it already! I might post more little snippets soon. It's good motivation to keep me writing! :) Kaitlin Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12396607556882297132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2650714799842481877.post-29339740431379206872013-06-18T10:42:30.401-04:002013-06-18T10:42:30.401-04:00Oh, I love it! (Not that this comes as a surprise...Oh, I love it! (Not that this comes as a surprise, because your writing always draws me in immediately ... ) :) Bowie is instantly endearing and Caroline gets a million brownie points for being a 7th Heaven fan.<br /><br />Can't wait to read more! :)Sharihttp://workofheart09.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com